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Here is a writing assessment that I did on the

30.03.12

**//THE HAUNTING//**  **//Shadows quivered on the wall as the candle flickered, then fizzled to nothing and suddenly the power switch flicked on and off many times. The light bulb turned as frosty as the snow in a early christmas morning .That was a the house in london called scared door because it was known for it's ghostly behavior, 74a baker st london that was the house. The family of four lived in that same house that all the supernatural things were going on when they came home the family felt a sudden wintry wind blowing on to them, they went and had a look that all the window was closed , they were all closed suddenly they family of four was never to be seen again ...//**

**//The Year was 1921 a very delightful couple arrived in London from Brazil, they came to have a satisfying future for there children. The couple found a nice little hut that they could live in so they did, but what they did not know was that was no ordinary house it was a paranormal house as the people of Baker st said. The Husband was called Alberto when he was going to have a shower he saw a strange figure in the shower he went and look but there was not a single alive soul to be seen. He was seeing the same stranger figure for quite sometime now. He told her beloved wife Ruska but she said it was nothing but you mind play tricks n him//**

**//Now Ruska started seeing things as well so the couple decided to sit and talk together, their little talk went really good. the couple decided to get a priest in the huse and see if anyone soul was there when they called the priest he ran away from the house saying " it's in there", and crazy thing like that. The poor couple was scared to death a couple of weeks later the both of the husband and wife's body was seen hanging from the roof. That got the town worried so they decided to burn the house down when they did they town found a grave yard below the house. The Town called a really really good priest the priest let the bodies to rest and then that house was never to be spoken of again ...//**   **//Mark I got a 4p for this writing assessment .//** __**//Term 2 writing assessment //**__ **Sports is more important then Music .**

**I know we all love music but can we really have a really good future ahed for us if we want to be a singer or Musician ?.I know it has a lot of money involved in it but there are a LOT a down sides to it .**

**Firstly when your a famous musician you live the best life you can you will have everything you ever dreamed about but there is a huge down side to it there are a lot of famous people that go on drugs and alcohol and end up having serious issues and some even die. Why you ask ? . Because they are put through so much pressure it not all glitz and glam .**

**My second point is Sports is much more better then music. Why ? Some people have really good future ahed of them if they try hard enough to prove that they can do it .I believe that its a really good work out, there is nothing better than playing a good game of rugby and toughing it out .**

**Lastly I strongly believe that sports is really good for you. For people who don’t have much friend is its a really good way for you to make friends and travel when your playing different teams people .If you were a really good player you can even travel the world and even represent your own country**

**I strongly recommend that everyone need to play spots to get fit, to make friends and none of your family member want you to get on drugs because you were a musician but was not as famous and you had all this pressure from everyone saying “ oh you suck ’’ or “ You can’t do that ’’ and you think its just too hard and you go and commit suicide or even over does prescription drugs**

**By Tanya Narayan**

**I got a 5p for my writing :)**  Creative writing



27.07.12 ==This week we've creating fairy tales ( anthology ) I think this part of the activity was really fun beacuse we got to work with a partner that we never had so we can share each others ideas together here is the final draft I hope you like it .==

**// __The major adventure of Alice, the ugly duckling, the little mermaid, Cinderella and the the three little pigs.__ //**
==**// Once upon a time there lived an young beautiful woman called Cinderella. She lived with her horrible stepmother and two stepsisters. All she ever did was work, work and more work. She was becoming very annoyed at the way she was being treated like a slave and she desperately wanted to do something about it. She had finally come to the point of non-resistance and decided to plan an escape. //**== ==**// One late afternoon her evil stepmother came inside with her hands full of bags filled with dresses and the latest perfumes. She couldn’t shut the door so she called for one of the stepsisters to shut the door for her. Cinderella knew her stepsisters very well and knew that they would never do a job like that. She waited and waited until everyone had gone to bed and then made her move. //**== ==**// She called her most trustworthy and best friend Alice she lives in a wonderful wonderland and Cinderella had always dreamed of visiting. “Hello” Called Cinderella, “anybody home”. Someone with a sweet and soft voice replied “ Oh hello dear how have you been ”. “Fine, well not exactly fine because all I ever do there is slave jobs” replied Cinderella. “Come On, let’s get you all clean like you used to be” said Alice happily. //**== ==**// Cinderella and Alice decided to go to market (The forest market) to buy some nice clothes to where. While they were happily strolling along delighted to be back together again, Alice, out of the corner of her eye spotted a little duckling sitting all by itself. They both kneeled down to see what it was doing. The small duckling slowly turned its head up to see who was there. He was sobbing his eyes out. Cinderella softly picked him up and asked him if he was alright. The answer was no. “all my brothers tease me because I’m different” mumbled the poor duckling. “I think that being different is great” replied Alice. “Really”. The young duckling was beginning to cheer up now. “Really” said Alice sweetly .They carried on walking with now three members in their crew. //**== ==**// While they were merrily skipping along the path they spotted two very sad looking pigs. Because of cinderella and Alice’s kindness they both had to find a way to make them happy. Both cinderella and Alice asked what was wrong with the two cute but miserable looking pigs. One of them replied “Oh the big bad wolf Blew our houses down and now we have no where to live”. “Wait”, the other little piglet perked up, “We still have our eldest brother”. “What a great idea Alice commented” “The only problem is that our brother lives across the sea of the Caribbean, “But we need to get there before sunset because he is going on a holiday to fiji”. //**== ==**// So off they went now with five Courageous members in their growing crew. The two little pigs had been to their brothers house before and could remember the way. They decided to go down to the port to hire a boat. They saw a very nice one which one of the pigs loved the look of. The old man in the shop had a beard almost the size of santa clauses. They hired the chosen boat and were about to set sail for the deadly Caribbeans until A voice interrupted them. It was the old guy running the shop, and this is what he had to say. “Beware, out there NO ONEhas ever made it back alive from those oceans. //**==

**// When they were heading off about one hundred metres away from the port they heard a faint call, don’t misjudge her. //**
==**// They sailed and sailed until they came across a beginning storm. The waves were slowly but surely getting larger and they didn’t know what to do. “Oh no yelled one of the little pigs, my torch just slipped out of my bag and that cost me three worms”. “I can get it for you” shouted the ugly duckling. He reached over the edge as far as he could go, “just a little further”. Cinderella was just about to grab his two little webbed feet but before she knew it, SPLASH. The ugly duckling was struggling to swim in this massively rough sea. “H -- e-l, Before he could say p the waves hauled him down under the surface. //**== ==**// Suddenly something blue and sparkly emerged out of the dark blue roaring sea. It appeared to be holding the ugly duckling. It was the little mermaid. She splashed back into the sea with a crash. “Hello, my names Arial, nice to meet you guys. “ I seem to have bumped into your duckling friend” said Arial. The duck was on board and huffing and puffing while trying saying to Arial “ Thank you ”, and somehow Arial could understand him. “Well that’s sure ok my friend But all the dangers not over yet”. “If the evil sea witch spots you then she’ll head for your boat, knock you all into the sea and keep you as her slaves”. “But we can’t breathe under water” said Alice nervously. “She gives you tablets that make you be able to breathe underwater” replied the little mermaid. //**== ==**// They carried on their journey with Arial by their side. They were paddling their hearts out when The ugly duckling shouted “land ahoy, land ahoy”. They were just about to clamber out of their big boat when out jumped the evil witch. “Nobody crosses my sea except me” roared the evil witch. The advantage was in the crew’s favour because there’s more of them but they remembered what the wise man in the shop said “don’t misjudge her” //**== ==**// ”. The fight went on … and on. The evil witch decided to use one of her most powerful but rare weapons (The laser fork). The laser fork is a giant fork that shoots lasers out of the three ends. Arial brought out her one aswell. The only problem was that hers Only works under water. She took a dive into the shallow Caribbean water and zapped her fork straight at the evil witch. The witch did the exact same thing. The lasers connected and were forcing each other backwards and forwards. One of the little pigs remembered his book in his little backpack. He hauled it and everything else with it out of his backpack and lobbed it as far and as hard as he could. Smack, It hit the evil witch right in the face. She tumbled out of the sky like a firework. Then she exploded into a ball of flames and floated down to the waters surface. //**==

**// The end:) //**

 * // By Tanya and Elliot //**